October 28, 2013

CHARACTERS I MET AT A TRAIN STATION

“All my good stories are told to me by the characters.  I don’t write my stories.  They write me.”

— Ray Bradbury


























We got to the train station before the indoor waiting room opened, which left me standing in the frigid air with three grandparently people who commiserated about the weather’s recent and sudden twist into winter.

“Was that your boyfriend?” the man with a trim white beard asked me.

“My husband.”

He smiled and nodded, as though drawing conclusions.

Once we were inside, people began to arrive steadily, most in pairs, and a few small families.  I watched an Amish husband and wife arrive with a babe in arms who had her own very tiny, very stiff black bonnet covering her round head.  Another father in shorts was following his son, about two, on an exploratory venture through the station.  They paused longest to watch the workers removing enormous panes of glass from the windows at the far end of the room.

“That’s not going to keep it very warm,” the man across from me groused to the world at large.  When one of the workers came to inspect the windows nearest to us, the man asked if these were also being taken out.

“Yup.  Putting in double panes all across the room.”

“Shoulda done it last week,” grumbled the malcontent across the way.

A tall, white-haired woman entered with her daughter and spent several hesitant minutes looking toward the bearded man and his wife.

“I am supposed to know you, aren’t I?” she said to them finally.

“Yes, you are,” said the wife.

The white-haired woman was visibly racking her brain.  “I know I know you, just let me think . . . “

When she had gone, her daughter sat down and began a conversation with the couple.  “Her memory is getting worse and worse,” she confided to them.  “It’s hard to see her like this, and I can’t stay with her for very long at a time.”

I just caught a few words that passed between an adventurous-looking man and woman, but it was enough to convince me that they were from the other side of the pond – England, by the sound of it.  I never got a chance to talk to them.  Meanwhile, a gentleman with a hat like the ones my grandpa used to wear took the seat beside me and promptly buried his nose in a newspaper.  We had been sitting side by side for upwards of twenty minutes when he turned toward me suddenly.

“How’s school?”

I told him I’d graduated in May.

“You have a job?”

I said I didn’t.

“Well, I can understand the trouble you might have finding one.”  And then he was back to the paper, and not another word passed between us.

The train rolled into the Ottumwa station exactly an hour late.  The variety show that had been waiting inside assembled on the platform, all shivering and wrapped up, except for the man who commented with incredulity on my mittens, claimed that he was perfectly comfortable in his shorts.  The wife of the bearded man whispered indignation on my behalf.

When I boarded I was seated across the aisle from the forgetful woman’s daughter, who slept for the bulk of the journey.  The little girl named Carmen who was sitting several rows back was more restless.  Her young parents passed her back and forth between them, sometimes letting her walk up and down the aisle.  Her father, who kept a long, entirely intact cigarette stashed behind his ear, stopped briefly at the seats in front of me.

“How old is she?” the Amish husband asked Carmen’s father.

“She just turned one.  And how old is yours?”  He indicated the bonneted baby.

“Ten months.”

“What’s her name?”

“Pollyanna.”

Pollyanna was a much happier child than her older counterpart.  I heard nothing but laughter and cheerful babbling from her for all of the five hours our train was in transit.

They were all headed for the same stop as I was, it turned out.  Chicago was the end of the line, and every one of these characters left the train in the dimly lit tunnel of Union Station.  As I walked toward the building to meet my cousin and her fiancé, the indoor taxi service passed me, and the wife of the bearded man gave me a friendly wave from the backseat.

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